Mind Control

Prologue I would like to thank those that have read my stories ancommented on them. This is a complete rewrite of the second chapter of my story “The Barfly” originally posted in the forum. I would like to ask those of you that honor me with negative votes in groups to leave some comments so that I may learn what readers dislike in my stories. I would also like to ask those of you that like my stories to throw a wote my way to keep them in an accessible position. Enjoy J. Bailey The Barfly, ch. 2, rewrite He woke...

Episode 7: Debugging The Code Zack was zipping down the street on his new scooter. He'd been out and about just having fun on it for the last hour. Finally, he decided to head on over to Brian's house, to show him his new toy. He zoomed around the next corner, and headed off for that part of town. Zack noticed immediately that Brian's pickup truck was gone, so Brian was almost certainly not home. Oh well, he thought. I'll show it to Wendy, then. Zack knocked on the door, and then walked in, calling out a greeting. He heard Mrs...